Treasure Island

Hazel Durham


Moonscape


Their playing my tune, like flying me back home to my silvery moon,
Showing off with its white eerie glimmer,
I'm sitting on its very edge, highlighted by its vain shimmer,
Searching for fun waiting for the morning sun,
I have my wishing rod, casting a line,
To catch happiness, knocking out sadness, for a life so fine,
Spears are targeting my heart, driving out the demons and fears,
Moon of mine, releasing turmoil, dreams exposed,
With many moments of repose.



Slight of hand the angels are playing, in a heavy metal band,
Sand falling through times, of an ever-changing land,
Seascapes with crashing waves of extreme power
It's white surf eating the shore line,
Like a wild fire,
Magnetic pull of forces that need to be covered in a black drape,
Lure of the wide open landscape,
Dividing my soul,
Leggy high spirited foals, frolicking in lush green meadows,
Fleeing from no mercy foes,
.



Living in a dreamscape of velvet bogland, of burnt brown,
Spreading a sense of lonliness all around,
I hear music so beautiful with such an alluring sound,
I have many turbulent rivers to cross,
Carrying a great sense of loss,
Leaving the past behind, but it always surges back into my mind,
To fence me in is to make each day a serious offence
Freedom is a seascape, a landscape and a dreamscape,
It all adds up to my intriguing moonscape.

Submitted: Saturday, May 11, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013

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A fantasy of an emotional journey!

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  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/12/2013 6:06:00 PM)

    wonderful imagery make this poem really really great
    still hard to imagine angels play heavy metal band but everyone have their wishing rod to catch happiness, knocking out sadness, for a better life
    enjoy to read it more and more
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • ~ Jenie~ (5/30/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    so long and classical ventures
    yuk, ..
    baby child sleeps under his mom s venture
    seas are nt the slaves of tides
    great... (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (5/22/2013 2:54:00 PM)

    loved the poem very much, , , , ,
    angels playing in a heavy metal band, , , , , what an imagination, , , , hats off, , (Report) Reply

  • Soumita Sarkar (5/22/2013 12:48:00 AM)

    Truly an emotional journey.........with so many thoughts tucked inside the soul-many passions do speak of loss........but the wish to go ahead remains strong..........long like this moonscape.Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan (5/16/2013 11:40:00 AM)

    Poetic thoughts go awry.It has some apt and beautiful metaphors like 'wishing rod', 'spears' and 'turbulent rivers'. And a philosophical write no doubt (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (5/15/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    Dear frnd. you have done a lot within a short span. but you have to do more and more without caring who is reading your poem or not.. in the last stanza you have written I have..........loss. indeed it shows your efficiency and brilliancy and your vision. keep it up my frnd. you r never late. touch the sky and go ahead.. after ur routine job devote for poetry only. (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (5/14/2013 9:55:00 AM)

    I loved the long lines style in this piece of yours to start with. The rhythm is quite remarkable especially the rhymes inside the lines. there are certain emotional lines which compels one to stop and think for a while. This was a joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (5/11/2013 11:55:00 PM)

    The culmination is here:
    Freedom is a seascape, a landscape and a dreamscape,
    It all adds up to my intriguing moonscape.

    i liked the words carrying rich images! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (5/11/2013 1:27:00 PM)

    Great imagery Just mooning around Lovely construction and playful thoughts in your moonscape BB : O)) (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (5/11/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    You have great imagery in this poem. It rhymes well and it flows smoothly too. (Report) Reply

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