Moonrise Poem by Terence George Craddock (Spectral Images and Images Of Light)

Moonrise

Rating: 5.0


As day passes spent slowly swoony delirious
I commit myself to restorative divinity sleep.
Like an exploring embryonic deep-sea diver
merging within welcoming murky mystic deep.

My soul eightfold I ceremoniously merge
into kaleidoscopic cosmic expanding realities.
An alien world I enlightened astral explore
through saffron star dust distant galaxies.


Through misty moonrise colouring grey
cloud paint streaked monumental morn.
Vision astrological alines prophetic potent
alien messiah is star bright ritually born.

Diverse vegetation stretching straining upwards
aspires immersion layered Siddhartha sky.
Undulating in shadows, unenlightened call sorcery dim,
flexing rhythmic dance, energy pure galactic hymn.


Copyright © Terence George Craddock
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The rythm and cadence you use, make me hear the poem as an hymn, and at the same time (hummbly) as a sensual dance in an exotic world. Wonderful. Laura

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Juan Olivarez 25 July 2010

just an awesome use of the english language, wish I had that in me, wonderful poem George.

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