Moonlight! ! Poem by anju addanki

Moonlight! !

Rating: 5.0


Under the Moonlight,
Along the beach,
With stars above,
Walking hand in hand,
Knowing the comfort we get,
The peacefulness of the hug,
Oneness in the kiss,
Making love strong,
Sharing the chocolate,
Melting our heart like snow,
Makes our life so sweet,
Making my heart rest at peace.
As we cuddle,
You are the woman who owns my heart,
Is what I hear,
Making my hug tight,
I thank the MOONLIGHT.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shalini Sundararamalingam 10 September 2009

very romantic poem, could be phrased even better with some rhyming...

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Nikunj Sharma 10 September 2009

A moonlit sky hangs above Cold water kissing the sole Silence swept surroundings Love be the goal... Romance riding the breast of breeze, Hand in hand we walk with ease

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Joseph Poewhit 10 September 2009

A real nice cuddly poem

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Anjali Sinha 22 September 2009

nice and romantic surely a tenner from me anjali (do read mine which I just posted its A CUPPA COFFEE WITH YOU)

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Kranthi Pothineni 15 September 2009

Moonlight is apt title for this write.

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Chitra - 12 September 2009

moonlit expressions...effusing the strobes of passion

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~ Jon London ~ 10 September 2009

A beautiful romantic scene Anju my friend...The emotions are all dressed with life, and drizzled in love...wonderful imagery paints the moment beautifully 10+ for sure

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Marieta Maglas 10 September 2009

This extremely romantic poem is well-received and elicits strong emotions. Thank you for sharing.............10+++++

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