Moonchild Dreamer Poem by Doom & Gloom

Moonchild Dreamer

Rating: 4.4


Most beautiful vision my eyes could behold
Opens before me, like a flower unfolds
Offers me kindness, a pollen so pure
Nectar of love and sorrows one cure
Caught in the trap of Venus's eyes
Honey so sweet the gods would cry
Invite me in, ingest my soul
Let me merge and become whole
Deep are these roots that make us one
Drenched in rays from passions sun
Removing the blight from deep in my heart
Entangled embrace, no longer apart
Amorous thoughts with grow so high
Moon light dreams that light the sky
Eternally bound and rooted in place
Romance has grown in the loneliest place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
RyuOh Kenshin 29 June 2007

your poem is beautiful, every line is beautiful and filled with soothing words

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Changing Sky 07 May 2007

Such a beautiful poem... and I love the last line.

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David Taylor 23 April 2007

Ok this is one of the best I've read for some time, works both at a universal and individual level and unfolds as you read it with a most delightful soft landing at the end, yep I like it very much, many thanks D&G, love from David

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