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Moon Slowly Shines Her Face

Sticky eye lines are shaded by her vain
Longing my pain beyond the pain
Sky gathers the clouds pang
My Love slowly raises its gain

Water color pales her face
Rain may be drop on surface
The song slowly up my face
Love slowly moves me to race

She don’t know how to race
I try and try her face to face
I move her through case to case
And moon slowly shines her face

- Shaleheen 28th October,2013

Submitted: Sunday, October 27, 2013
Edited: Monday, October 28, 2013


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  • Madina Morris (11/22/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    I really would love to know the meaning of this poem ;) love it

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  • Poetic Passion (11/20/2013 2:06:00 PM)

    very lovely write.. melodious, nice imagery, fantastic and fabulous writing.10 points

  • Sudip Chandra (11/20/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem. well perceive and rhythmic and melodious also nice wording...

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/6/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Patricia Grantham comment I appreciate and I also support lovely love this 10

  • Patricia Grantham (11/5/2013 8:10:00 AM)

    The moon has a beautiful and mysterious glow. When it shines
    on your face it gives it beauty that is unimaginable. Good lines.

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/5/2013 12:05:00 AM)

    Superb poem, Islamicaly i luv d moon so i found dis moonshine poem soo nice!

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