Musfiq us shaleheen

Veteran Poet - 1,093 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Moon Slowly Shines Her Face - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Sticky eye lines are shaded by her vain
Longing her pain beyond the pain
Sky gathers the clouds pang
My Love slowly raises its gain

Water color pales her face
Rain may be drop on surface
The song slowly ups her face
Love slowly moves her to race

She don't know how to race
I try and try her face to face
I move her through case to case
And moon slowly shines her face

- Shaleheen 28th October,2013


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Comments about Moon Slowly Shines Her Face by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Rookie Madina Morris (11/22/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    I really would love to know the meaning of this poem ;) love it (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Poetic Passion (11/20/2013 2:06:00 PM)

    very lovely write.. melodious, nice imagery, fantastic and fabulous writing.10 points (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sudip Chandra (11/20/2013 1:57:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem. well perceive and rhythmic and melodious also nice wording... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/6/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Patricia Grantham comment I appreciate and I also support lovely love this 10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,890 Points Patricia Grantham (11/5/2013 8:10:00 AM)

    The moon has a beautiful and mysterious glow. When it shines
    on your face it gives it beauty that is unimaginable. Good lines. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/5/2013 12:05:00 AM)

    Superb poem, Islamicaly i luv d moon so i found dis moonshine poem soo nice! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 4, 2014


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