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(November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

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Moon (Lies) Light

I loved you {once}
But a long timed ago ¿
When moonlighted flood
awashed our naked bodies
Lying so still in affinity

No moonlight now
no longer seventeen ****
Looking back it's all just impossible
a longing sweetened dream

Stand up, walking to the opened window
Looking out, into the {heart} of midnight
Feeling, reliving, lost eternities
Oh! Bye and by as I longingly sigh (!)

Wishing emptiness would last forever
In the emptiness of the [Soul] of Midnight
No expectations or derivations
Midnight sheds her skin
Burned by moonlight's callous lies

Submitted: Monday, October 07, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 08, 2013


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  • Kevin Patrick (11/28/2013 5:39:00 PM)

    The memory of broken love never heals, time heals all wounds only if your stoned on codeine. Great stuff painful and great. I will never mention the moon and you again

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  • Ambrosia A (11/7/2013 4:39:00 AM)

    such a fantastic poem, great lines. Honestly never felt the heat of moonlight before reading here your silent words

  • Liliana ~el (10/18/2013 3:41:00 PM)

    Oh wow; pretty incredible
    Significance of your past loss really brought out; disappointment, lost opportunity impossible dream lost eternities
    Shakes me to chase after love and opportunity and treasure it as it may one day be no more!

  • Lyn Paul (10/16/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    Beautiful lines in each verse.Real romance

  • Louis Cecile (10/13/2013 1:54:00 AM)

    A quite haunting piece that is emotionally descriptive of the mystery of the essence of moonlight mixed with life.

  • Heather Wilkins (10/12/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    beautifully presented by the poet. a poem from his heart about the long ago. 10

  • Vera Sidhwa (10/12/2013 1:33:00 PM)

    Looking out into the {heart} of midnight is deeply poetic. The entire poem goes deep into the heart
    of the reader. Super work. Ten of ten.

  • David Wood (10/12/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    Moonlight can be a cold experience, but soon dawn will arrive and the sun's glowing embers with soon shine bright into a sunny day. We never know what is around the next corner.

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/8/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    Feeling, reliving, lost eternities
    Reminisce of the past under moonlight beautifully presented. The last line is very powerful indeed. Thank you.

  • Noreen Carden (10/8/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    Midnight sheds her skin.Burned by moonlights callous lies. Beautiful words brought together beautifully in your poem.Well done

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