Moon Poem by wabi sabi

Moon

Rating: 5.0


Grown up
strong enough
being alone
work hard
smiling there
thinking hard
to make things go well
feeling afraid of a hypothetical scenario

At night
we are just not robots
we get fidgeting just like babies
for no reason

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
B.m. Biswas 14 May 2017

Enjoyable... Yes it is the very moon that makes us children always and if one looks to it at night one cannot but asking some childish questions...

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Elena Sandu 30 July 2013

Whow! Great image, for us only the night is full freedom. I think this poem hold deep thinking, revealing the connection with our ancestors. Full moon and fidgeting are well known to be friendly to each other...

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Ramesh Rai 29 July 2013

10++++++++++++++++++

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Ramesh Rai 29 July 2013

love your smiling write

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Gajanan Mishra 23 July 2013

make things go well, good write, thanks.

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