Moon Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Moon

Rating: 4.9


As I was bidding bye to mother,
Found there shining object other,
Mom was waving hand in smile,
I was stunned and amused for while,

Why I was feeling so cool?
Did I loose nerves and looked fool?
Dark was disappearing with her show,
Silver lines were coming in flow,

I had mixed feeling and joy,
Mom in sky and moon enjoy,
Was a thought simple rejoice?
Gentle touch with low voice,

Moon was slowly emerging,
Stars darkened with rays shining,
I wanted to measure her dark patches,
With imaginary painting and colourful catches,

I conveyed her to rise slowly,
Beautiful object ruling only,
Movement slowly with gentle walk,
Whispering in ears with smile and talk,

I want to share happiness,
All goodness to isolate loneliness,
Belongingness found in oneness,
Is it not said in pure greatness?

I continue to hold lenient view,
Look for solace and advice for few,
Your are my symbol for peace,
With silver linings and mind at ease.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaul Vania 08 August 2009

inddedd very good poemand interesting....10

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Rupa Shah 08 August 2009

very very good and lovely....10

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Suresh Vakil 08 August 2009

embodiment of love cool atmosphere....10

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Ratna Patel 09 August 2009

lot of inspiration from moonass object....10

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Ketan Rajgor 10 August 2009

moon is really a symbol of love...10

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A beautiful poem about Moon Mother, . 'I conveyed her to rise slowly, beautiful object ruling only, movement slow with gentle walk, whispering in ears with smile and talk'. 10 Karin

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Merna Ibrahim 16 October 2009

Superb poem as usual...the rhyme is marvelous! ! thanks for your comment.10s

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Sulochna Pandit 15 September 2009

As I was bidding bye to mother, Found there shining object other, Mom was waving hand in smile, I was stunned and amused for while,

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Jigisha Vyas 19 August 2009

it is inspring object always, , , ,10

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Kunwar Patel 14 August 2009

grat inspirational love object....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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