Moon Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

Moon

Rating: 4.5


When the days turn dark and dreams take birth,
Shines a beauty o'er the tall, dark hills,
Which being a missionary from the heaven
Lightens our pious, blue earth.

When never shall you glow,
Bring me back to the heaven,
I'm not among earth's cynical, cruel men.

When nights fall asleep,
Meets me your eyes,
To me, you're my life's obsession
And beyond you shall never I find any destination.

'Shall never you die? '
It's what I believe,
If it shan't be and upon me verified,
Shall never die a man but earth would surely have died.

Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: NATURE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 October 2014

a beautiful poem, you write so well.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 October 2014

Nicely defined- wonderfully crafted i feel envy -When the days turn dark and dreams take birth, and-'m not among earth's cynical, cruel men. every line is flowing like river, every spell is powerfully defined thank you

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Salini Nair 29 October 2014

awesome write at this age..................continue with poetry....nice

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 October 2014

Brilliant piece penned beautifully........great imagery.......nicely done...10/10

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