Moody Poem by Nel Omofolarin

Moody

Rating: 5.0


I am writing my way to fame
And thy gentle eyes are my keen witness
Albeit, thou barely know I own a merry name
On this glyph abounds a furnished credence
My life, a witty poetry
Often awkwardly versed
My strive, a dicey lottery
Enticingly easy goldmine of seldom vague inverse
Words are like happy birds
My heart, their cozy nests
So, tease me not with words that woo
My subtle heart might yet proves vulnerable
And just be ready to coat in quotes...



May,20/2015

Moody
Sunday, May 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fame
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The need to be known as a poet, informed this writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 May 2015

Hello poet friend. I enjoyed your poem and say welcome to Poem Hunter. My best to you. Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.

2 0 Reply
Nel Omofolarin 27 July 2015

Loyd...thanks for your kind comment

0 0
Kelly Kurt 24 May 2015

I understand, Nel. To be known would be amazing, but to just be a poet and enjoy your craft is quite rewarding too. Thanks for sharing. Peace

1 0 Reply
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 August 2015

Hi Nel! A very nice poem! Honest and intentions made very clear.In your own words- Words are like happy birds - my heart their cozy nests! Keep it that way - pure and sublime! Firstly, poetry should be written to make the inner self joyful. The rest -leave it to nature! Fame is an elusive and slippery! :)

0 0 Reply
Nel Omofolarin 07 April 2021

Thank you amazing woman

0 0
Ayman Parray 27 July 2015

Nel you are fine poet, fame will come in time but even if it does take long do not be disheartened. Enjoy your craft and be glad that those happy birds are in their cosy nests. You do know that some of the all time greatest poets were never appreciated the way they should have been in their lifetimes- right. Good luck my friend.

0 0 Reply
Nel Omofolarin 27 July 2015

Encouraging....thanks ayman

0 0
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 20 July 2015

It seems that your way ahead has no end. Be inspired and be your own designer as well as molder. Good luck!

1 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 June 2015

Yes words are like happy birds. Wow very super poem! Thumbs up.

1 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 June 2015

Yes words are like happy birds. Wow very super poem! Thumbs u.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success