Sreekala Sukumaran


Moods of The moon


Moonlight in the beach is awesome,
Moonlight creates lovely mood,
Moonlight makes your mind so fresh,
Moonlight makes you feel pleasant.

In moonlight dinner is so magnificent,
In moonlight dancing make you great,
In moonlight music gives much pleasure,
In moonlight walking make you close.

Moonlight makes you feel romantic,
Gathers special love stories,
Moonlight gives you crazy thoughts,
When I am with you my dear….

Submitted: Sunday, May 23, 2010

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  • Rookie - 26 Points Gita Ashok (6/9/2010 12:01:00 AM)

    Any praise to the moonight can never be in excess. You have done jusice to the Moonlight with your lovely words. Moonlight is simply mesmerising and mystifying. May you bask in the coolness of the Moonlight, always! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Ravi Sathasivam (5/24/2010 5:54:00 AM)

    'Moonlight makes you feel romantic,
    Gathers special love stories,
    Moonlight gives you crazy thoughts,
    When I am with you my dear…'
    You have fallen love with moonlight.
    Moon is one of the poetic sign of love.
    You have said it well. Lovely
    Thanks for sharing with me
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Nooruddeen Mm (5/24/2010 1:18:00 AM)

    Sreekala,
    Nice one. Poets are always after moon/moonlight
    All of a sudden you have changed the total mood of this poem in your last line.
    It deviates the reader from your main theme (Or was it your intension?)

    (If you go thru my 'My River' you can see moon and moonlight there) .
    Rgds
    Noor (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,584 Points Ken E Hall (5/23/2010 5:29:00 PM)

    A nice moonlight poem shining on your loved one and sets off a thousand ships...
    your thoughts are shining here regards uavanice1 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,898 Points Hans Vr (5/23/2010 5:48:00 AM)

    The thoughts expressed here
    appear like my own,
    They are just expressed with more majesty
    Enjoy the glory moonlight
    Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr.tony Brahmin (5/23/2010 2:01:00 AM)

    Dear Sreekala,
    you have fallen in love with moonlight. how you finely describe your experiences in moonlight. is there also this moonlight always in your heart which you make you poetic? ? thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

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