Mood Poem by Aiman Saleem

Mood



I'm thinking what to say and what to do
When you are talking to me and i'm not talking to you

What to say now?
What to explain?
Everything seems to me pretty clear and plain

What to say now?
What to explain?
Everything seems so pretty good, to you I sound insane

I'm thinking what to say and what to do
I thought everything would be known to you

What to recall?
What to talk?
I'm drifting away slowly and I guess I am drifted

What to recall?
What to talk?
Everything seems to me pretty stagnant and infected

When you say out things, why don't u think?
And I sink, I sink, I sink, in your words I sink
And now you are out of words, so am I
Silence is what you can sense
Nothing can I think!

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Monday, March 15, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ro'ya Abdulaal 18 March 2010

I love it, soo romantic and heartbreaking, again could be a song, I loved the refrains, the words, the rhetorical questions and the sensuous tone, well done

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