Mood Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mood

Rating: 4.8


What can be termed as mood?
Can that be called conducive for good?
Situation may not take you out of wood
You may not even like or prefer food

It is perfect condition to emit ideas
Nothing will be heard even good pleas
Good melody may also fall to deaf ears
Perfection may take longer or even years

Mind may set in and take complete rest
Emergence of constructive but thoughts best
Some times may prove hard or acid test
Right time to strike, write and paste

Don’t attempt when nothing appeals
Thoughts may cross and ideas repeal
Allow normal function with gate closed
Gradual entry with no more ideas forced

It is like child demanding toy
Nothing will convince even if you employ
Good alternatives with submitting to demands
Even if you threaten with severe remands

Childish play with funny acts
Got to know with basic facts
Simply arranging with current scene
Facts to be reflected as never before seen

Poets are whimsical and funny
Care not for any more penny
It is simple presentation of views
May not head to any more clues

It is not magic or creating words
Simple notes and looking too forwards
It may not have head and tales
Poets are many as sea have whales

Poets may create new concept and waves
Beautiful ideas which may produce heroes and braves
It may not be drive powerful wagon
Certainly a sharp and double edged weapon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Radha Seth 24 August 2009

It is like child demanding toy Nothing will convince even if you employ....10

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Kamli Kamal 25 August 2009

It may need no extra efforts You don’t have to loose even slight comforts.....10

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Suwarna Patil 25 August 2009

It is perfect condition to emit ideas Nothing will be heard even good pleas.....10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 26 August 2009

Mind may set in and take complete rest Emergence of constructive but thoughts best.....10

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Lalvani Rekha 26 August 2009

It is perfect condition to emit ideas Nothing will be heard even good pleas....10

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Suresh Vakil 18 September 2009

What can be termed as mood? Can that be called conducive for good? Situation may not take you out of wood

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Shilpa Maheswari 15 September 2009

What can be termed as mood? Can that be called conducive for good? Situation may not take you out of wood You may not even like or prefer food

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Vinod Karmakar 14 September 2009

What can be termed as mood? Can that be called conducive for good? Situation may not take you out of wood You may not even like or prefer food

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Edwina K 29 August 2009

It is like child demanding toy Nothing will convince even if you employ.........10

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Sadia Hussain 28 August 2009

What can be termed as mood? Can that be called conducive for good? Situation may not take you out of wood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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