Madhup Mohta

Rookie - 0 Points (28 January / Jalalabad (India))

Monika


Monika
Rainbows are fantasies,
Of an anaemic sun.
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  • Gold Star - 11,601 Points Ramesh Rai (10/22/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    Monika
    Poems
    Are promises
    Of passion.
    If only, we had read
    Each word would have promised
    Inevitable pain (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Miroslava Odalovic (10/22/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem, glad you highlighted it and entered the contest I'd probably have no chance to read it otherwise. Whatever its outcomes I am sure it'll be ingrained in many readers' memory. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tushar Bhatia (10/18/2013 10:27:00 PM)

    True and beautiful

    Nice one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amar Nadeem (10/18/2013 9:35:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Compels to ponder over. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarvjeet Soodan (10/18/2013 6:01:00 PM)

    So true, so beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Kalra (10/18/2013 3:36:00 PM)

    Excellent & touchy, , , , , , What an imagination (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Romi Mittal (10/18/2013 3:19:00 PM)

    Sensitive, with a touch of poignancy! The imagination is lucidly vivid! A poem that can be 'felt'..A beautiful ode to unfulfilled emotions! !
    Madhup..kudos! ... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deepak Angad Jain (10/18/2013 2:44:00 PM)

    Very very nice n written truely n honestly... Ur imagination is realy mind blowing... Realy amazzzing, , :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Meenakshi Tiwari (10/18/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    very elegant... and beautiful Monika
    every word has it's own story ... nice combination of science and nature......
    indeed a beautiful and marvellous picture comes into mind while reading Monika....
    pleasant feeling..... it serves...... Lovely composition...... (y) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yashaswi Chauhan (10/18/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    monika is b'fully written.....by reading dis....i realized dat ur imagination is travelling at speed of light......u r many light years ahead! ! ! it means(in physics) dat ur imagination is beyond any time frame...how can i reach there to understand wat r u feeling abt. dis world....u r very very far(beyond reach) ...pls keep writing for us (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan (10/17/2013 10:50:00 PM)

    Dear Madhup, your poem will definitely touch a chord in many people's heart. It was lovely and enjoyable reading. Keep up the good work! Wish you all the best for the contest. You may win a prize - who knows! ! But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arvinder Suri (9/28/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    Superb! ! ! Reading it once or twice was not enough! ! ! Seen your love for Monika in your eyes... you've penned it n i could see the same love filled eyes all over again! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,601 Points Ramesh Rai (9/23/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    Oh Monika! i gaze your beauty. beautifully versed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kanchan Pathak (9/20/2013 9:06:00 AM)

    Words from the depth of heart!
    Beautiful composition, full of emotions.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Manisha Rathi (9/20/2013 7:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful, moving, worth thinking about..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Abhilash Fraizer (9/20/2013 12:54:00 AM)

    it is beautiful piece of writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tushta Gandhi (9/19/2013 11:25:00 PM)

    Wow.... beautiful poem! Reading it once is just not enough.
    Dreams are facts,
    Of life lived after-hours.
    If only, we were awake
    Each wish would come true
    In the moment of its conception....... lovely! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Niraj Grover (9/19/2013 9:11:00 PM)

    Your love for Monika is enshrined in this poem...this poem i enshrine in my memory for it's sheer poetical beauty.....poem of such beauty is kudo itself...wish i could write a piece of poetry as fresh and beautiful...God bless you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shyam Sunder Sharma (9/19/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Very poignant! Thank you. I love it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,969 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/15/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    good write Monika, thanks, I like it. (Report) Reply



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