Money Poem by Shan Superguy

Money

Rating: 5.0


Dedicated to user Travis Richardson and my old friends.

I want money,
Money to buy honey,
Or money to get a bunny;
Money is sweet,
And with it there'd be no reason to cheat,
Because whatever I did, I wouldn't be beat;
Money is power,
I can make other people cower,
In fear of being thrown into a mud shower;
Money is wealth,
It keeps me in health,
'Cos I don't have to go raound in stealth;

But money is bad,
It can make you sad,
By spending all that you had;
Money is sour,
Like a weed, not a flower
That gets worse by the hour;

Mostly, money is a kiss,
If you use it properly it won't go amiss,
And you could be living in bliss.

This was my first under-15 mins good poem on my own, I hope you liked it. I would like some money, but don't want to use it badly. I may or may not have ripped off some bits from other people; I'm not sure.Any part - or all - of this could possibly encompass a lot of people's ideas about money.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amelie peace 14 May 2009

very trus i like the second stanza....very good poem.....yeah money is good...cept if you greedy :) then you get war^_^

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Maria Janeth Tumbaga 07 November 2008

well thats true no money no honey: D

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