Money 360 Poem by Ankit Neil Sharma

Money 360

Rating: 5.0


Indus river is flowing
to the north of india
and, our country is engulfed
in the sea of corruption,

save my country
from these traitors
then, save my dignity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenie Franksay 17 October 2013

a good thoughtful poem... add more feeling, increase poem length a bit.. keep writing.

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Dave Walker 10 August 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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