Moment Poem by Lucifera Santez

Moment

Rating: 5.0


Your hair,
Your eyes,
Your lips,
Your smiles,
Your glances,
Your promises
Everything is here
Where we are
Together
Beneath the stars,
A perfect moment,
A perfect place,
We enjoy the silence together
And nothing is said…………………….

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
just something i wrote after watching, Greys Anatomy season finale.
for Derek and Meredith.
:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 08 August 2013

Short but very beautiful, captures the imagination.

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Vishal Sharma 08 August 2013

just perfect blend of romance in the tone of sweetness

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Sina Farajzadeh 09 August 2013

Hi. When there is love no need to speak. The feeling would go into the minds and souls. I like this. Good Luck. (There are more words in silence than in speech. is a quotation of me)

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Alireza Asgari 20 August 2013

it really hurts my heart! I had my angel, I thought albeit she was my angel, but another man was with her beneath the stars you mentioned.... perfect poetess and perfect poem!

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Heather Wilkins 14 August 2013

a nice moment quiet and peaceful

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Hazel Durham 11 August 2013

A moment of sheer bliss captured with such passion and written with such panache! !

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Khairul Ahsan 09 August 2013

When love flows between two yearning hearts, Gods and angels listen, And softly silence speaks, And softly silence speaks.....

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Sina Farajzadeh 09 August 2013

Hi. When there is love no need to speak. The feeling would go into the minds and souls. I like this. Good Luck. (There are more words in silence than in speech. is a quotation of me)

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