Lucifera Santez

Rookie - 35 Points (4th feb / Belize)

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Your hair,
Your eyes,
Your lips,
Your smiles,
Your glances,
Your promises
Everything is here
Where we are
Together
Beneath the stars,
A perfect moment,
A perfect place,
We enjoy the silence together
And nothing is said…………………….

Submitted: Thursday, August 08, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

just something i wrote after watching, Greys Anatomy season finale.
for Derek and Meredith.
:)

Comments about this poem (Moment by Lucifera Santez )

  • Rookie Alireza Asgari (8/20/2013 1:37:00 AM)

    it really hurts my heart! I had my angel, I thought albeit she was my angel, but another man was with her beneath the stars you mentioned....
    perfect poetess and perfect poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/14/2013 4:01:00 PM)

    a nice moment quiet and peaceful (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,074 Points Hazel Durham (8/11/2013 2:15:00 PM)

    A moment of sheer bliss captured with such passion and written with such panache! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,258 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    When love flows between two yearning hearts,
    Gods and angels listen,
    And softly silence speaks,
    And softly silence speaks..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 353 Points Sina Farajzadeh (8/9/2013 2:51:00 AM)

    Hi. When there is love no need to speak. The feeling would go into the minds and souls. I like this. Good Luck. (There are more words in silence than in speech. is a quotation of me) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 353 Points Sina Farajzadeh (8/9/2013 2:49:00 AM)

    Hi. When there is love no need to speak. The feeling would go into the minds and souls. I like this. Good Luck. (There are more words in silence than in speech. is a quotation of me) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (8/8/2013 2:14:00 PM)

    just perfect blend of romance in the tone of sweetness (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,076 Points Valerie Dohren (8/8/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    Short but very beautiful, captures the imagination. (Report) Reply

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