Mom Is On Her Last Couple Month Poem by phillip dalsing

Mom Is On Her Last Couple Month

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my mom is dieing and it hurts me so
i wish she knows that i miss her so
she brought me in this world and i love her like nobody i know
when i found out she only had acouple month to live
i wanted to die because i am her kid
she fed me throw her breast put me to sleep to rest
she has hept-c and is still shooting up dope man she is so desiesed
why must i lose my only mom i love her more then anyone
please god watch over her in heaven
i can't take the pain
that i fell deep down inside
i can't wait tell it is my time
keep a chair next to her lord so ican be with her again
i love my mom she is my best friend tell the end
when she goes i will always remember the good times
not the bad ones because i wont her spirit to be in peace
i don't want to desturb her why she is always asleep
i love u mom please R.I.P

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sofi Martinez 25 February 2008

I have become speecheless when I read your poem, I am very sorry. Ask God to be a lamp to your feet throughout these very rough times.

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ivory Harris 28 January 2008

It was hard for me to read becauzse I started to cry. I almost lost my mom. A year ago I wached my Grandma B die of Cancer. I will pray for you and your mom. God Bless

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Mattie Jay 27 January 2008

pain so real this poem cut me deep

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Phillip Dalsing 25 January 2008

i wrote this because this is how i fell if any one reads this and fells the same way i want u to know i fell for your pain so keep your head up and in time u will see your love one again.

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You put real emotion into your writing, very intense, almost painfully so. L&T

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