Mm: ( Poem by shweta khosla

Mm: (

Rating: 5.0


How many times?
How many crimes?
Occur in this city

How many emotions?
How much devotion?
Still left in our kitty?

Will it ever show?
That reality the crow
Is very very ditty?

But you live everyday.
Suffer, be sad, be gay.
Pointless, little catty

There is no choice
I’ll still raise my voice,
It might seem batty

The only four letter word
Disgraceful in this world
Is a word called pity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

the emotion is displayed perfectly on this poem! outstanding

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Reetessh Sabrr 10 January 2009

captured quite rhymingly the irk!

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 October 2008

TRULY INTROSPECTIVE... :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 September 2008

A nice verse with a true conclution! 10 from me.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 March 2008

It is true, every soul is craving for self pity, which indicates a weakness, as you say.

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