Mix..........Whatever........... Poem by Anne Ornelas

Mix..........Whatever...........

Rating: 3.3


Wanting to be someone i'm not.
Lieing to myself and to others around.
Whats happened?
Why is this happening?
The only answer to it
is because i'm letting it all happen
let it get to far.


Not wanting pity
Tired of seeing it in peoples faces and eyes.



God i'm sick of this
might as well let the current
take me like a float



11/10/08


just popped into my head so just figured to submit it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 30 July 2009

The only answer to it is because i'm letting it all happen let it get to far............u have admitted what most never want to.... nice write.... ;)

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Aijaz Asif 16 November 2008

it sure do happens sometime to us too, a very beautiful and moving write with deep thoughts...a very rare writting style which i like myself...thanks 10+++++ nd A++++...added to my favs.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 November 2008

The expectation is higher when your demand gettin bigger.......this is the fact of life we have to live with.nice piece Anne.Keep writtin!

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I like this poem and it is somewhat similar to Krista Churchill check her poems out!

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