Misuse? Poem by Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam

Misuse?



A drunkard innocent 5
And sure an whore virgin were 7
Both the products ill- 5
The vicious insatiate use- 7
Their might the Almighty gave. 7

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

You have shown or marked with digit the syllable it is good to grasp pentameter or septa meter also pitch is followed soft and hard except on last it missed use of iambic...vice or virtue both are available well writ

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Amitava Mazumdar 20 June 2013

it's good to see that you can write with digits. good one

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