louis rams

Freshman - 794 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

***************mistress Answer****************1978 - Poem by louis rams

the lover is the backbone of his mistress
he is her hopes, her dreams, her fantasies.

he keeps her on a string, but to him she is everything.
through her he sees all his failures and mistakes
whereas he sits and contemplates.

she in turn looks to him for strength
and guideness in her hours of despair.
and knows when she needs him
he'll always be near.

she lives in her realm of fantasies
and depends upon him for his 'realities'
she is what she wants to be
living in hpocrisy.


Comments about ***************mistress Answer****************1978 by louis rams

  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Heather Wilkins (5/30/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    excellent writing Louis (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,072 Points Patricia Grantham (3/12/2013 1:55:00 PM)

    I love this poem and it's contents. Romantic yet strong in rendition. Thanks.l (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christine Kerr (9/19/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    It's nice to see where our strength and weekness can compliment each other. Good thoughts once again (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/19/2009 7:29:00 PM)

    she lives in her realm of fantasies
    and depends upon him for his 'realities'
    she is what she wants to be
    living in hpocrisy.......yes she is everything for us and we look beyond everything for here.... good to read and understand it....10

    butterflies around.... come home... home bound..no separate ways (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2009



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