dreams are wondering
in foggy mist
trying and searching
for love filled bliss
bliss
alas! bliss
life is shattered
like broken glass
memories are mingled
like jigsaw puzzle
thoughts are
in the search of
missing pieces
this is a very cool poem. dreams are wondering in foggy mist good lines for your reader to get a image. written well. good job. Becca
Life shattered.........scrambled into millions pieces.........rejuvenating the soul seems impossible.Nice piece Asif.
'Thoughts are in search of missing pieces' Wow Bhayya. beautiful inddeeeed.10
dreams are wondering in foggy mist trying and searching for love filled bliss, we all searching of it, hope you find yours, very lovely poem touch my heart
Asif The missing pieces of a jigsaw is an excellent title and theme. As the poem was fairly short and the imagery wonderful, I found it had a direct impact on me. Well done! Karin Anderson
dreams are wondering in foggy mist trying and searching for love filled bliss .......wonderful lines! ! ! I really love it!
'life is shatered like broken glass memories are mingled like jigsaw puzzel thoughts are in the search of missing pieces ' I particularly liked this last stanza beautiful as alwys the enigmatic Asif +++++++++10 anjali
We always try, the missing piece of life, And try to find the way to go out, This poem is so great, something like I try to find now... I trying to find the 'Missing Piece' Woww, , the great one, , Love it so much... Naru Kaede,
An enigmatic write of tangled feelings and random emotions!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a philosophical write...reads good, Aijaz...thanks for sharing...10