(*missing Link* Poem by Silent Speaker

(*missing Link*

Rating: 2.2


I am the shoe that dosn't fit
The leader standing without support
The flower growing in darkness
The judge without a court

I am the soul struggling for survival
The body without blood
The lungs without air
The earth stained with mudd

I am the candle without fire
The stomach without food
The mind without a concious
The person without a mood

I am the paper without lines
The knife thats dull
The necklace without a diamond
The person without legs yet stands tall

I am the book without words
The pen without ink
The pop without caffine
I am your missing Link

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 13 August 2009

wow what a sweet poem is this one.. candle with out fire.. well done and you presented cause and effects as two opposte variables which is making your poems great and the idea is enough rich and thoughful and meaningful..well done, and appreciated..you are doing a good job..10/10

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Kale Beaudry 30 May 2009

Some very intense imagery, and original lines strung together to make the perfect poetic origami. I'd suggest you fix up the meter in the several places it's off, as well as the several spelling mistakes just to polish this poem to perfection. Good stuff, I liked it.

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Nangula Immanuel 29 May 2009

Well written! ! The Lord is or missing link to eternal happiness. Well thought out! !

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