…………………………………missed You Poem by Rehan Hyder

…………………………………missed You

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missed you
in pauses when foetus of thought
aborted and word went down the drain
and could not lodge itself in loft
of your ear or warmth of your heart

I missed you
when eye encountered sun of circumstances
sight blinded I groped for your hand
and found mine with maps of world
drawn upside down

I missed you
when I took your name
and million autumns set free
my mind is a wasteland
where a deafening echo
of “I miss you” a tyrant

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

very effective imagery reflect that feeling of missing for aborted loving fetus, ....10++++missed you in pauses when foetus of thought aborted and word went down the drain and could not lodge itself in loft of your ear our warmth of your heart I missed you when eye encountered sun of circumstances sight blinded I groped for your hand and found mine with maps of world drawn upside down

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Ejaz Khan 09 June 2009

Foetus of thought being aborted, is bad, very bad and yet it was just a thought. You'll certainly give birth to many more, A beautiful poem, greetings!

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Indira Babbellapati 09 June 2009

what wonderful imagery from nature have you conjured up to convey the intensity!

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Joseph Poewhit 09 June 2009

Reaching a self centered person is really tough.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 June 2009

Missing you sad poem. With amazing imageries. With bleeding emotions. 10+++

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