Miss You So Much! Poem by Angel's lyre

Miss You So Much!

Rating: 5.0


Do you remember the days
When we promised one-another
To love and to forgive forever
To be happy with each other?

Then God was our witness
And the kiss was our seal,
And this sweet declaration
Is our everlasting bill!

Not being able to understand
The presence of our mutual absence
I keep praying the Almighty Lord
To give us strength and patience!

Remembering those precious days
I start missing you again,
Alas! Mountains and countries are between us
Speaking by phone is not enough!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 04 October 2009

wow really a sweet and rich poem and done with profesional and perfect way..meaningful and expression is enough interesting and impressive..well done 10/10

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Dream Catcher 25 September 2009

I put my fingers on my ears and read this poem out aloud (thats what i ve been doing with like every poem i ve come accross here 2day lol) and i swear it brought tears to my eyes....maybe because i think i know how that feels... Well written

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Emma Adamyan 23 September 2009

a poem that full of true emotions, feelings, pain... dont forget my dear... everyone can make promisses, but few can be true abt them. keep on writing and stop suffering 'ahchi' :)

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jimmy zepp 14 September 2009

Dear poet friend, Mountains, countries...even long boundaries could never be considered obstacles in front of an everlasting love! ! ! Love will endure...as long as God is supervising it all... God bless... 10+++ from me

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2009

Remembering those precious days I start missing you again, Alas! Mountains and countries are between us Speaking by phone is not enough! ....so beautiful in theme as well as in intent...it is beautifully interwoven in words....similarly i painted in miss i miss you....i loved it dear.............10 read mine Mary to marry.....anywhere.... butterflies around and no separate ways.....

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