Queeny Gona

Veteran Poet - 1,134 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

Miss You (Revised) - Poem by Queeny Gona

Years passed on
Mostly in disguise
Very calm indeed.

Never a word
Said I,
How amazing you are!

You’re Kind at heart
with great attitude –
Lovesome, helping even foes.

Above all,
keen to kneel,
Paving path to lead us to god.

The times – your discipline,
Mentoring and Guidance.

My days of bonding with you,
In our world of paradise.

Ever more, to find you
Humble and meek all the more in times of agony.

A simple thanks note
Thought I, would reach you now
To portray my LOVE.

Thank you Lord
For blessing me
With amazing mama!

Comments about Miss You (Revised) by Queeny Gona

  • Gold Star - 6,662 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/8/2014 8:24:00 PM)

    Structured with intense longings that leap into the lane loveliness. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 28 Points Emmanuel Arunee Mwanza (11/24/2013 2:28:00 PM)

    nice writing....i suppozed it iz a dedication....keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,134 Points Queeny Gona (11/22/2013 10:48:00 PM)

    Thank you dear Utsav Patel for yr wonderful comment, by mistake yr comment on this read has been deleted. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (11/22/2013 1:51:00 AM)

    Queeny, I am confused who you are referring to! Is it about your earthly Mother or your Heavenly Mother Mary who is the embodiment of patience and endurance and a link between God and man? Any way a lovely poem! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,634 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (11/20/2013 6:43:00 AM)

    Someone who has all the characteristics we cherish is God. We then express our adoration to Him. Beautifully expressed in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (11/19/2013 9:56:00 PM)

    .. a lovely poem.... read it many times... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (11/19/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    If it were I, I would stand confounded on the track of these strange experiences you share Queeny. A blend of what is earthly and what is that is diametrically polar, the theme of the poem evades my comprehension. Anyways, you have rendered your feelings well and used the canvas of poetry for portraying these sketches of feelings so brilliantly. A good write Queeny.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 245 Points Charles Darnell (11/19/2013 5:48:00 AM)

    Delightful....your words could have applied to a lover, Jesus, or in this case, a mother. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,739 Points David Wood (11/19/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    A delightful poem expressing genuine love for the Lord of love. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (11/19/2013 1:25:00 AM)

    A lovely and beautiful tribute with prayer. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 19, 2013

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