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Queeny Gona

Rookie - 149 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

Miss You (Revised)


Years passed on
Mostly in disguise
Very calm indeed.

Never a word
Said I,
How amazing you are!

You’re Kind at heart
with great attitude –
Lovesome, helping even foes.

Above all,
keen to kneel,
Paving path to lead us to god.

I ADMIRE
The times – your discipline,
Mentoring and Guidance.

I CHERISH
My days of bonding with you,
In our world of paradise.

I ADORE
Ever more, to find you
Humble and meek all the more in times of agony.

A simple thanks note
Thought I, would reach you now
To portray my LOVE.

Thank you Lord
For blessing me
With amazing mama!

Submitted: Monday, November 18, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, November 19, 2013

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  • Rookie - 149 Points Queeny Gona (11/22/2013 10:48:00 PM)

    Thank you dear Utsav Patel for yr wonderful comment, by mistake yr comment on this read has been deleted. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,300 Points Valsa George (11/22/2013 1:51:00 AM)

    Queeny, I am confused who you are referring to! Is it about your earthly Mother or your Heavenly Mother Mary who is the embodiment of patience and endurance and a link between God and man? Any way a lovely poem! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,541 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (11/20/2013 6:43:00 AM)

    Someone who has all the characteristics we cherish is God. We then express our adoration to Him. Beautifully expressed in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,505 Points Dinesh Nair (11/19/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    If it were I, I would stand confounded on the track of these strange experiences you share Queeny. A blend of what is earthly and what is that is diametrically polar, the theme of the poem evades my comprehension. Anyways, you have rendered your feelings well and used the canvas of poetry for portraying these sketches of feelings so brilliantly. A good write Queeny.. (Report) Reply

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