Until this day, from the first bright morn, the expression of your passion, the tenderness of your first “”hello”, the compassion of true love welcomes the warmest heart...
not even a single minute I lost you coz every corner of my mind you are here, the manly voice I always hear Is as deep as the falls in the mountain, the attitude that you have is as stubborn as tigers, the ideas which always contrasting mine are the hard scores that melts my heart....
your image is viewed in an imagination that portrays every part of atlas, no reason for me to forget you coz you are always the closest among, you are here in times where no one understands why I cry, ...
not knowing, there behind the clouds, where sun gives warm to emptiness..... I always wait...I always wait...
nice visual metaphor there behind the clouds, where sun gives warm to emptiness. nice lyric poem, touching 10/10
if only i am an emotional guy, i will cry when i read this poem... it's catchie... touchie... so good.... well penned!
Sometimes I hate been human... Some feeling are hard to bottle up. I guess it is the beauty of living Good write and well express..
beautiful metaphor....nice to read all through and well written....10
it seems to be pouring emotions for me.. this is for the third time today that my eyes got moistened while reading poems... great poems and can't stop myself saying this that love is the queen of all emotions..
'Splendid poem of all moments'....a great poem....sobering Heart of hope.... God bless
Don't tell me you're in love with a man with a tiger's bad treats. Good that he's gone but then you missed him. I don't understand, really love sometimes is imbecile.I'm glad you had this inspiration otherwise you can't write. This piece I considered 'melancholic'. Well penned.
Better end it, one should not attach him/her self so much emotionally. Narrative and heartfelt.10s
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
not knowing, there behind the clouds, where sun gives warm to emptiness..... I always wait...I always wait.....ya that is how one deeply feels when entangled too much in life with dearest one.... it is human to feel lonely in isolation and remember every moment u spent with your past....lovely creation to be rememebered for long....10 read mine, , , , i miss... miss i miss u...a place called home