Musfiq us shaleheen

Veteran Poet - 1,302 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Miss You - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

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I was there for waiting
and not wait after
The place we met together
before a long time
and the time never return the moment-
Past is past and hope is future
Truth is there
and I miss you here
The roads are demolished and narrow
Colors are lost and mirrors are shattered
Dark sobs and burns,
no moment replies
Truth is there but again
I miss you here…
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@Musfiq us shaleheen,24th October,2013

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Form: Sonnet


Poet's Notes about The Poem

i miss you...........................................i miss you, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , i miss you

Comments about Miss You by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/6/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    Pro memoria a love poem, thank you lovely write (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,102 Points Patricia Grantham (11/5/2013 8:15:00 AM)

    A lovely soothing write. Missing someone you love is
    echoed in your sentiments here. I feel this poem.
    Good thoughts here. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,893 Points Heather Wilkins (11/4/2013 4:41:00 PM)

    nice writing Musfiq. the truth is there but again I miss you here. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, May 25, 2015


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