Mishaps Poem by Surayya Abbas

Mishaps

Rating: 4.6


How far can we feel
Nothing's wrong
Nothing bad is to happen
Its audacious to predict
But human miscues......!





4/6/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muizza Abbas 06 April 2009

Yes.... Human can plan future.... But Life is going its own way.... 10 / 10

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Sabeen Khalid 06 April 2009

You are very right Yes... Life is mystery.....

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Sameer Ahmed 07 April 2009

A very short compact poem indicating two factual aspects of life, one being the question about the vastness of human mind to conceive happenings in the future and the other being the rule of prediction which is at times necessary and requires fearless and daring attempts to forecast through challenging assumptions. The concept of prognostication can only be fulfilled if one understands both these notions and apply this in life considering the message conveyed in this poem................10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Kesav Easwaran 26 April 2009

short simple lines tonnes wise...man proposes God disposes, isn't it? neatly said neatly composed poem bit, Surayya...10

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Muhammad Ali 18 April 2009

Amazing approach very simple and nice lines friend :)

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Satheesan Rangorath 16 April 2009

Very simple sensible and deep poem with a touch of art. Good work Greetings Satheesan Rangorath

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Sandra Martyres 10 April 2009

You are right...man proposes but God disposes...the art of prediction cannot be perfected. Nice short write

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Amin Khan 08 April 2009

life no one really knows how to prove that mystery, your own flesh of blood will betray you, your friend will show back at the time when you need them the most, but they are with you when you got something what kind of mystery is this and why cant we see this thing before wht cant we predict it.

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