Misery Poem by Chris Newlash

Misery

Rating: 5.0


Take my own life end it all.
Will you catch me when I fall?
On my hand and knees I crawl.
No longer standing big and tall.

Someone help, mercy me.
Take away my agony.
Cleaning up this tragedy.
Save me from, misery.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bless Villena 21 September 2008

this perfectly describes some of the moments ive had in my life...nice write

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Amanda Wixom 22 September 2008

Wow... u were right i do like that... thats how i felt the other week... weird

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Gabriela Perez 22 September 2008

this is a really good poem and i like how it expresses how you might have felt

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Great poem. Showing how a brief of words can show endless possibility of deep emotions

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Ershad Mazumder 22 September 2008

Yes, more than 10 for you. I like short pems with deep meaning. Long poems are very narrative.Poetry is not essay or report.

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Bob Gibson 25 September 2008

A very well penned poem Chris, the young take life to seriously

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Ken E Hall 25 September 2008

Hi -well done with this one lots of young people end their lives if only they could write a message like this one, regards Ken e Hall

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Cory The Alchemist 24 September 2008

I feel this poem has a lot of power in it. It is very hard to write a poem that stirs up such great angst in the reader but you did it perfectly. Well done.

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Sarah Abdullah 24 September 2008

Someone help, mercy me. Take away my agony. Cleaning up this tragedy. Save me from, misery. We all got a part of us that need to be saved VERY GOOD i LOVED IT

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 23 September 2008

Utmost despair speaking out of this poem.

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