Mirror Poem by E.A. England

Mirror

Rating: 4.7


when i look into the mirror i see a person that i know
someone who is with me everywhere i go

a girl just lookin for some fun something new to do
tired of the same old thing so many paths to choose

with her family behind her and her friends right at her side
her possibilities are endless, opportunnities open wide

she can't be weighted down by troubles won't be held by fear or stress
when life throws her her its problems she only gives her best

so by looking in the mirror, by gazing at her face
this one girl has realized she has finally found her place

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 15 July 2008

The first poem hits the bullls eye.An excellent work with words as you express your feelings it carries the reader for more my 10

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Nikunj Sharma 31 August 2009

She looked in the mirror and she saw her eyes... they bore the reflection of the blue skies... she saw something, like a wing now nothing could hold her down she broke the string.. to fly away, to have some fun to laugh at the world, to kiss the sun to glide through the sickle moon to keep flying, not to return any soon.......... wow is the word for your poem......

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Very reflective poem-please excuse the pun-it's always nice to see the depth of one's very being beyond the image in a mirror.

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Anna jonson 03 August 2008

i like this poem you truly expressed what was inside your heart, your heart and your soul

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 18 July 2008

Call me Talk to me As the butterfly Dance As the rose Scent As the nightingale Romance Look at the flickering light in the mirror Wipe the tears, fears Love Shines out

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 July 2008

I really like the way Elizabeth wrote this. She has a real good style for writing poetry and I hope she doesn't stray too far grom iy. She can say whatever she wants to say with this style. GW62

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