Mirror Poem by gothic fairy

Mirror

Rating: 5.0


I'm eating you with my eyes,
I'm chocking you with my words
because your words make me want to scream.
you make me want to die,
cant live this lie.
my skin feels like its clawing blood.
i feel like i cant see,
like i cant dream.
feels like i have to hide everything inside.
feels like i have to lock every word in.
cant take this anymore,
you cant except me.
you don't even know me.
i cant believe you made me loose myself.
you make me want to die,
your words are eating me alive.
I'm eating you with my eyes,
I'm chocking you with my words,
because your words make me want to scream.
your breaking me down,
with every tear i don't cry,
with every word i keep inside,
you make me want to die.
why do you make it so hard to get along?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 29 January 2010

'im choacking you with my words '----i think the new girl who is trying to make new friends should look herself in front of the mirror again-to see if how shimmering is she in her words which gives her a new avatar-than her sesquipedalian sensibility at an age-where somone would want to die and reborn again for her. I am a banned member here.So please condone me for not adding to your voting pad.I can't vote anyone and neither anyone can vote me. But i will give you a 10 or maximum.....as someone who will wish you well.....may be not friends but as a person-an unknown...Cheers.Aamit Rothschild.

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