Mind Walking Poem by AKHIL RAVEENDRAN
Mind Walking
Poem name; Mind walking
Written by; akhil raveendram
Date; 30august 2015
Sitting in the empty zone,
And walking in the empty space.
What is in the empty space.
What is in that paradise.,
Any one reach those destiny,
Any one do those fantasy.
Close your eyes and make your feel,
You can see my paradise.
What you feel, and what you do.
When I dream, I can reach,
I am blind and mad in dream..
Then, what is use of useless dream,
The mind is playing in this game.
Why you check inner dreams,
That is not an easy game
I can see your darker face,
That is why, I interfere.
If I did a big mistake, saying sorry hundred times.
And I will go far away.
It is only my mistake, and I am not blaming you..
Free to say, what you want.
when you reach this empty zone.
keep an eye and cross my mind.
And close your eye, feel your dreams.
Awesome poem dear poet! It's very well penned! Enjoyed a lot reading it!
Any one reach those destiny, Any one do those fantasy. Close your eyes and make your feel, You can see my paradise.. great imagination. a poem which is very original., thanku dear poet. tony
A nice poetic imagination, Akhil. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
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4/24/2024 6:54:14 AM # 1.0.0.1119
empty zone, empty space, dreams, loneliness, mind inner movements, . so many points you bring in my dear poet in this poet. you have meditated a lot on the working of the mind. this is a beautiufl poem. thank you dear poet. tony