Tara very irritated with PH injustice (9/7/2007 4:11:00 AM)
An astoundingly good piece which leaves the reader wondering., .... and wanting more. t x |
Ben Gieske (8/28/2007 3:54:00 PM)
Poems about nature intrigue me. I find this one also very interesting and worth exploring its meanings. The human nature is hardest to fathom or, at least, to accept at times. |
Melvina Germain (8/24/2007 10:14:00 AM)
Wow! I know I havn't been around for quite awhile, you do make me use my imagination. this is a whirlwind of a masterpiece Tailor, I have to wrap myself around it again and again, wonderful work Tailor.--Melvina-- |
Alison Cassidy (8/22/2007 10:26:00 PM)
The language is superb Tailor and the whole piece a poetic commentary on working and dreaming; on imagination and memory and the personal foibles that arise from the surreal mix of both. Your work teases the reader Tailor and leaves a series of strong impression rather than black and white photographic account. Excellent penning. love, Allie xxxx |
Adeline Foster (8/22/2007 2:36:00 PM)
Title is pure genius, great hyperbole. Great line: “Super ego courting purity”
Adeline |
Not a member No 4 (8/11/2007 5:05:00 PM)
I really like this one too Tailor because it opens up so many possibilities. It has its focus, but there is so much swirling around it allusively that it drew me in so deeply I was suddenly 'adrift among prattle oceans', though lacking a bit in the 'super ego purity' department! (an 'in between bit for effect') . Brilliant exit to boot. As always - very special work! jim |
