Metaphor Of Life Poem by SALINI NAIR

Metaphor Of Life

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A dawn that breakout from shadows
Sieve the rays of hope in return
Mist that sparkle in silence
That sows the seeds of hope bundle

Dusk and dawn that damp eyes
Loss though delight mind in turn
Behold the nature that mourn all way
That sobs behind in gloominess

Set the strands in his hand
Glow that metaphor at rise
Red that swathe at withdrawal
Laws of nature still glimpses

Life that starts with a cry
Death that set mood of cry
All delight in days of life
That set before in conquest! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Tuesday, September 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2014

Dusk and dawn that damp eyes...glow the metaphor at rise. Beautifully presented poem my daughter. May God help you in rising ever and you write such beautiful words. My best wishes are for you.

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Amitava Sur 23 September 2014

A thoughtful write life with all the sorrows, hurdles, and joy in it, is detailed nicely here. Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 September 2014

Yes this is life despite dawn and dusk existing beside.....pains and pleasure make life more lively....... very insightful and well composed

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