Metamorphosis Of Me Poem by Adens Kamwi

Metamorphosis Of Me

Rating: 5.0


A new me
a more enhanced and powerful theory
a more distinct and better personality
one that seeks no calamity
and is not greedy
A better me
the kind that needs security
and wants no notoriety
a me with more sanity
and increased honesty
A braver me
one that excepts responsibility
and hates animosity
a me that spurns jealousy
and waits patiently
A diffrent kind of me
one that lives happily
in phyisicall and spiritual tranquillity
improving continously
walking caustiously
Yes a colossal me
one that lives positively
in accordance with modesty
a seeker of serenity
one with longivity
a me with a new destiny
Yes this is the metamorphosis of me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 22 September 2009

beautiful poem nicely penned, , glad to meet this personality

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Whisperkwane Lamb 22 September 2009

a good sign...peace...love and emotion...serenity...can't be above thee...a place in your inner soul awaits the light...from the night before...so young to have such a great heart....keep writing my friend...

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Marieta Maglas 22 September 2009

nice abstract poem, nice portrait, lovely to read...........10++

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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009

nice abstract poem, very well written...............10

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Chitra - 24 September 2009

a spiritual makeover.. that each one of us should undergo!

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Obinna Eruchie 23 September 2009

An interesting on a way of improving yourself.

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Bryan Alexander 22 September 2009

sounds like the same kinda me Im trying to build. I like the flow alot and the idea.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 22 September 2009

That will be a perfect you, 'more things change, more things remain the same'.

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Adens Kamwi

Adens Kamwi

Katima Mulilo, Namibia
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