Meri Parchhai Aksar Mujhse Poochha Krti Hai Poem by shraddha shraddha the poetess

Shraddha, aapki kavitha bahuth achhi hai. Loved it. Keep on writing.. But as Dr Library had said an english translation would be better, so that all can understand. Saya humari kabhi peecha nahi choodthi hai woh humare saath me har gam mein ya khushi me saath saath he chalthi hai.

Amazing poetry which proves that greatness of an true artist is beyond any boundary and language in particular. It has simply mesmerized me, you have a wonderful talent with which very few people are blessed with.....I wish if I could write like this

khud chhipkr roti hai, , sbko hasaaya krti hai.. apni hasi k peeche kyu ankhon ki nami chupaya krti hai.. khush rehne ka nuskha sbko sikhaya krti hai..- - - - -very profound and beautiful lines!

nice poem................shraddha ji

ab ais par kiya kahoon. getting jelous. tum bohot acha likhti ho: P apni gazloo ki nazar utar lo :)

did not heard from you for a long time..............

wahh...waaahh..kia andaz e bayn hai parchai se aap beeti...bahuth khoob...

beautiful poem...keep it up! ! ! You are a great writer...

Well, i think it needs a translation, but as i found from comments, it should be so nice is it written in Indian?

Hatsoffff Girl! ! ! ! ! u did very gud.I love it