Mera Sarmaia, Meri Aas(Urdu) Poem by Yasmin Khan

Mera Sarmaia, Meri Aas(Urdu)

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Mera sarmai meri aas yehi khwab to hein
Jo sadiaon tak bune is dile nirash ney hein
Inhi se phooti hein roshni ki satrang kirnein
In ko bukhsha yeh aalam mere ihsaas ney hey
yeh khwab nah hon to zeest mushkil ho jai
na jalein umeedon ke charagh, har lamha bojhal ho jaie
inhi khawbon ke dieye
mein apne hathon peh liye
zindgi ki shahrahon peh gamzan hoon
aur rah dikhate hein mujhe meri duaon ke jugnoo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

Wah wah kya baat hai.......Lovely ghazal.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 September 2013

na jalein umeedon ke charagh, har lamha bojhal ho jaie..../mujhe meri duaon ke jugnoo hope is the heavenly gift hope we will live long hope we will achieve hope is the cause of dope too but u took hope very positive. no light no moment to be seen.../ glow worm that leads light nice very +++

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Farah Ilyas 24 September 2013

Dua, aas, jugno, kwab Wao sis how u combined these in imaginative way, after a long time i really enjoyed such fabulous Urdu poetry, want to read again n again. yeh khwab nah hon to zeest mushkil ho jai na jalein umeedon ke charagh, har lamha bojhal ho jaie

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Shahzia Batool 24 September 2013

A very thoughtful urdu verse... full of the sap of life, the fountain of which are the abstract dreams... beautiful opening, conveying a feel...my wealth, my hope are these my dreams, this dejected heart has been weaving for ages...a poem with a meaningful imagery, and message! ! !

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