Memories Poem by Salema Khatun
Memories
The sweet breeze of your words hit
the wall of my heart, some are soft
and some are hard , soft are those still
I remember, hard ones are sent to
fetch some soothing water your velvety
smell with that of the angel works like
a balm on the wounds of the moment
throwing sadness to the salty ocean ,
the freshness of your departure burns
me like a missile, I hiccupped with
the drink of your guerrilla smile, the
parody presence of you in the memory
of mine is a massacre of my mediocre
sense, so I faint and go deep to the
unconsciousness to crash the beauty
of my life in the put out light I explode
darkness to crumble all the weapons
of amazing love violence, I rise again
to my senses to water and to embrace
the iron tree of your remembrance.
Enjoyed reading your poem, Salema++++++++++ congrats on poem of the day++++++++
Salema, my first exposure to your poetry, and to a love poem written in this style. Both have won over a fan. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day.
An exquisite portrayal of emotions relating to a life blessed with love recalled in a flash-back. Congrats and Thanks for sharing the poem, Salema Khatun. the freshness of your departure burns me like a missile /...guerrilla smile iron tree of your remembrance.
A well articulated piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in beautiful diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Nice articulation and blend of words and phrases. Good poem. Sylva-Onyema Uba
Beauty of love is, its positive side paves the infinitely large area for poetry. Even loss of a love too does it better. Quite touching poem, deserves being the member's PoD.
With strength of hope, one can always rise again, against hopelessness. Well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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the freshness of your departure burns me like a missile, I hiccupped with the drink of your guerrilla smile, Liked this very much. A great poem to read but please put the punctuation in place!