! ! ! Melting Shadow! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ! ! Melting Shadow! ! !
where is the room of reeks ruffling
Time when flecks into reels of eons
have a wild laugh by the dream
the world will smile with you
may be darkness shoving there in hide
as shadow rucks in the coral reef
room of reason is lighted as wine
heart seeps the gleams of love divine
leaf may not stop its sway
by the sultry breath of the breeze
as riffs of shadow just melt away
darkness dissolves by stunning sun rays
Awesome words were used. Vivid poem with great imagery. I love this. Thanks for sharing. best regards, joan d.h.
Darkness dissolves by sunrays...i AM SO INSPIRED BY THE IMAGERY OF THIS! Interesting title my friend...another Great write Sub. Please keep sharing your thoughts so well... Take care of U Shelley
Interestind and wonderful write by you.I am impress by this write of yours and I also like the name you gave to this poem.
‘…as riffs of shadow just melt away // darkness dissolves by stunning sun rays…’ Sweet treble and soprano is echoing [melting-in] in ears like liquid euphony. Well written Sir Dr. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Please read / comment on my poems: Checkmate [In Elite 500] Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] or other poems please Dr. niv
A beautiful soothing write. To be expected. Glistening in the sun. Lovely images for the imagination. GW62
very clean astonishing poem......I liked it.............10
Shadows in the melting shadows..................locking n grilling the darkness of brightess days! excellent!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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'leaf may not stop its sway by the sultry breath of the breeze as riffs of shadow just melt away darkness dissolves by stunning sun rays ' I like this para the best. Your poem is heavy and mature. Very powerful with deep meaning. Great write Dr. Kar. We love your poems. Keep writing. You rightfully deserve a +10 regards anjali