Meet Me In The Horizon (Ft Vipins Puthooran) Poem by Unwritten Soul

Meet Me In The Horizon (Ft Vipins Puthooran)

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Lift me up above this endless line
Separated away in different dimensions
Our fated life refracted in slightly illusions
That lead us to be lost in hopeless mazes
So we're living through different phases
You're in a wide and opened sky,
A canopy of stars, sun and moon
While I lay in deep waters of the sea
Hiding mysteries without a real boon
But destiny did write us a script for glory
The moment in right time for a new life story
For now nothing will cease our chance to unite
In this horizon where we'll meet, days and nights
Waiting rising sun, the lamp of life for a new dawn
And No, no one can tread us to mourn
As we touch the skyline to greet,
An infinite hope for fixing our feet
Like the moon-glades that kissing
On the waves of sea and caressing
Those incessant waves in harmony
In the horizon meet me as a crony
Rise up from sleep as you live in the dark
Open your throat to sing like a skylark
Devotion in a song tears us like a rain from heavens
For blessings come pour our love from His heavens
So here, In this Infinite line we shared the pain
Endless touch, togetherness each other, and stay remain

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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I am greatly happy to collaborate with my pal Vipins for my very
first new poem for 'Life, Love, Nature' theme..
Such a good time to spent and learn how great to see
Vipins arrange my whole idea into this one..
He has very good visionary in poetry, really! !
I am looking forward for anyone to co write with me in the future
...Thanks for reading and dont forget to visit my friend page
Vipins Poothoran for more poems_UNWRITTEN SOUL
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 13 February 2012

Great team work my little soul, a great poem. You both have done a fantastic job. A great write.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 14 February 2012

Wooow! ! this is a masterpiece my friend...it reminds me of the old days when we used to go wait for girls at the river.we would watch the sinking sun and sing with frogs, from no where, its like you can hear the echoes of a djembe drum from a distance, like you can hear the sweet sounds of an imbira echoes down the terrain....wow! my friend, this is so beautiful man!

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 14 February 2012

Wonderful poem) . I like your stile of writing and you way of thinking...that`s one of the best poems I`ve read here

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Vipins Puthooran 15 February 2012

********************************* Meet me in the Horizon wherever you are; Sink your sadness down to the sea Rise up your happiness upto the sky When we're in the horizon we can touch both the sky and the earth........... And can share the sadness of a sinking sun or greet the happiness of a rising sun together..... This horizon is a togetherness of our mind **********************************

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Rekha Mandagere 17 February 2012

Soul is thought and Vipin is expression! What a fine blend of thought and expression can be seen here! It is really a great piece of work.High sense of esthetics is smiling here.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2017

Devotion in a song tears us like a rain from heavens For blessings come pour our love from His heavens So here, In this Infinite line we shared the pain Endless touch, togetherness each other, and stay remain... lovely theme. You have done collaborately and have ennoyed collaborately too. It is a beautiful poem with nice collocation. Thanks to you and to Bipins, your pal.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 June 2016

In different dimensions! Nice work.

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 September 2013

Dear Soul your poems are fantastic.. I loved reading it..Definitely I will read Vipins poems too..

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 27 June 2012

Those incessant waves in harmony In the horizon meet me as a crony Rise up from sleep as you live in the dark Open your throat to sing like a skylark a tremendous work put together........pouring lively images! !

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Neela Nath Das 09 June 2012

I always observe that a sense of fraternity works within you.So, nice! Captain has rightly said the harmony of dancing words are really noteworthy.Wonderful message Soul, really!

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