Measuring Measured Love Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Measuring Measured Love

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You may measure love in litres
or you may measure it in volumes or pounds
Love may get hotter than heaters
Love may never know any bounds.

You can tell of love from the pounding of the heart
You can feel it, sense it everywhere
Yet fickle infatuation's a common unwitting dart
You never know who shall fondly care

Yet even if the shortest sweetest words of the world are, 'I LOVE you'
Destiny might never let her admit it to you

For some loves have to be concealed in the secret closets of the heart
For if revealed they'd so upset her/his applecart!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Shea 25 March 2013

Hey you! Pushing my apple cart your way.....Fill it with the love...and love will come your way.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 27 March 2013

Great poem sister, loved it. Siya_! !

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Colin Bradley 28 March 2013

Your amaze'ing your talent has no bounds words of truth sometimes sad truth

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John Shea 29 March 2013

Zaynub, Love is a child in our arms, family, friends and esp our pets. My heart has secrets and hope they never break it. Love hush pup

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Bayla Burnett 05 April 2013

i love it it explains how i am it touches my heart how you worded it to! :) good job

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 September 2019

Beautiful concluding lines, a couplet, and fine play of words, dear Zaynab.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2019

You can tell of love from the pounding of the heart You can feel it, sense it everywhere Yet fickle infatuation's a common unwitting dart You never know who shall fondly care......outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem on Love has been astutely delineated.Thank you for sharing.10

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Akhtar Jawad 05 May 2015

For some loves have to be concealed in the secret closets of the heart For if revealed they'd so upset her/his applecart! A beautiful write.

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

Love is a favorite topic. all poets enjoy writing and thinking about. nice

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R.j. Wynn 11 May 2013

Love it, and it is always (your) apple cart that counts.

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