Me & You Poem by Young And Aspiring

Me & You

Rating: 3.4


Initually, everything I began with, slowly faded away.
Everything shaded to a different grey.
And there is nothing I can do.
All I know is I'm right here with you.
We can watch this world pause.
Without knowing the effect or cause.
Drifting to some other place.
All I can see is your face.
My heart has a change of pace.
We can watch everyone fade away.
Watch the trees sway...
Just Me & You...
and theres nothing anyone can do....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naz Khan 17 February 2007

wow i think im in love. amazin well done. well love that 1

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Melvina Germain 22 August 2006

I like it, yes nice one---Melvina

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Aiden Murdock 20 July 2006

i reaaaaaaaaally this poem, the feelin of blind to all but your soul mate, is ur breathe, very refreshin and i have the sense of being reborn, i dont kno y, it just does im a random, never speak of this again lol, luv ya lots

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Kelly Moy 28 December 2005

i can make blackberry spanish pie with whole wheat crust

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