>≫Me, My Bicyle And Life Poem by Abdul Wahab

>≫Me, My Bicyle And Life

Rating: 5.0


me and my bicycle
are in a queer relation
at least in the state of running
at high speed it keeps balance
but off balance my life becomes
while I drive at low speed

me and my life
now at loggerheads
at least in the matter of speed
my life runs well like a bicycle
but at the age of forty
I could not afford high speed
upon putting much efforts
I develop back pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 01 November 2013

a nice piece.good one. life is like bicycle. lovely write

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Heather Wilkins 02 November 2013

in some countries a bicycle is necessary a method of transportation. so ride on dear poet. nice comparison to life. 10+

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 November 2013

everything in this universe is set as per the system walk as per the system having high pace at stamina full creates a problem at low stamina energy is conserved and transformed one to another we are forceful at early age and later we keep the forceful mind nice poem 10

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Queeny Gona 05 November 2013

The line of comparission drawn between life and bicycle is so wonderfully expressed in this read. I enjoyed the read!

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 04 November 2013

Nice poem comparing life and bicycle; I could not afford high speed upon putting much efforts I develop back pain; sometimes breathlessness!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 November 2013

love this poem and the great comparison.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 November 2013

love this poem and the great comparison.

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