Me At Poem by Cynnd Rose

Me At

Rating: 5.0


You see a sunset
But I see another day wasted

You see miles running far away from you
And I see you walking them

You see me with eye lids shut tight
But I see darkness

You feel love and why it is
I feel completely powerless with my knowledge

You see a broken path
I see you fixing it

You see daylight coming
I see my love looking at the sunrise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 27 January 2010

nice poetry, loved reading it

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Melancholy Man 20 January 2010

you have a lot to say in so few words. I always have to read your compositions at least twice

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Goldy Locks 17 March 2008

excellent juxtapositioning. brought it full circle.

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