Me And You - You And I Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

I like this short and sweet. So love.

very nice.love dripping from every line.

awwwww...so sweet: D u have true love my friend and i am happy for you. this poem may be brief but speaks so much of the undeniable feelings..great poem.10+

Give this beauty some music and we have a wonderful love song.... It is sweet and fun and playful, like love should be.... Jim Troy

I have two comments on this, a normal one and experimental one...have fun read this poem! so here we start with : : : : : : : : : : Experimental comment You and I (Y N I) has it images in mirror Me and You (I' N Y) ...which it resembles each other in this beautiful poem...so if we put a mirror (II) and let see the image in short Y N I II I' N Y (you and I, mirror, me and you) ....what i mean here the sweet mind by 'you' and 'I' is equally enchanting so never mind we want start with you or me both brings great sweet heart.... : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : My normal comment i would rather say this: The touch of the sky in two day and night just make a soulful fly, i love the words you choose here it so calming with deep heart smiling...it's a cool write..i like it :) Keep it up.. :) _Unwritten Soul

Nice rhyming scheme, you've done it well. Another great piece of art here.

Beautiful, mellifluous well woven poem

Nice time Made for each other for enjoying carry on, Good Poem.

sweet, well-crafted, musical...