Me And You Poem by Hazel Durham

Me And You

Rating: 4.8


Avalanche of a thousand dreams,
Engaging, raging at lifes torrent of bad luck,
Like muck it sticks and dries hard,
Like been dealt a bad hand of cards,
Wishing to wipe the years away,
Let this be my bright new day,
Grasping for a lifeline to my innermost desires,
Buried so deep now they are like an extinguished fire,
This will be quite a leap,
To unbury the hidden treasure,
Gold tarnished, ready to be varnished,
Escape into the world of arts,
Magic hand in hand with hope,
Skies eternally blue without shades of you,
Just the sun beaming down on a beautiful view,
Searching for me the inner you,
Like I'm intelligent but then you act the fool,
Complex my soul divided,
I don't know who I am,
I'm so undecided,
Artistic wanderings welds us together,
Like the sun greeting us good morning,
And the moon says goodnight with its veil of darkness,
That can hold a warning.
As I frantically search,
Embracing the goodness and loveliness,
Passing the belonging test,
No more fight I have found the serene light,
For my world inside my shell,
Is bursting open to the sound of a beautiful bell.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*loved Soul* Christian 26 April 2013

Well written and beautiful.....Thanks for sharing

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Paul Brookes 27 April 2013

A complex poem from a complex soul I'm still trying to find who i am I think in the end we are many different people depends on who were with. Well express and written as ever, thanks for sharing BB : O)

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David Wood 27 April 2013

I agree with Lyda, a thought provoking poem that is complex yet straightforward. I like it.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 April 2013

Artistic wanderings welds us together, Like the sun greeting us good morning, passinate write by ingenuity,10+, thanks for sharing

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 29 April 2013

very moving heart... twisted and melted naturally...Artistic imagery... very well written.... Awesome....

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 June 2013

Wonderful poel Hazel, great imagery and very artistic. Siya_! !

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

lovely poem Hazel. artistic wanderings welds us together. like the thought.

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Owain Glyn 27 May 2013

Enigmatic, full of immense imagery, I love it.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 27 May 2013

I like this poem so much

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Soumita Sarkar 20 May 2013

A good write.............I invite you to read my poems and review them.............thank you.

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