Me And My Success Poem by Abdul Wahab

Me And My Success

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My first love
And my first success

To win over her
When I compare

I feel
I am more in love

With my success
Than my first love

Though her lips were
More red than coral

More erect her breast
Than the cliff Everest

Yet I get more taste
In the soft touch

More delight in the eyes
Of my success

When we walk
Hand in hand

Side by side
People see and awe

Our dazzling beauty
Spread all over

As I know
Success makes a man more handsome

So I see a bevy in queue
Posing as lover

But my success
I love her more

When she speaks
Oh, I am out of things to compare

Me and my success
Least I can say

I notice people
To sigh and wonder!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 July 2013

I like the message in this well constructed poem Abdul... And the style just suits the words perfectly. Siya_! !

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2013

beautiful write. fine verse. may god bless you my frnd.

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