Me And My Mom Poem by Malik-seven Navarre

Me And My Mom

Rating: 5.0


Me and my mom...
We're like peanut butter and jelly.
But sometimes we're different,
Like shrimp and cookies.

Our eyes are the same,
We have dog who's tamed.
But now he's in heaven.
Our names Sparkle and Seven.

We have our problems,
And many should know-
That we still love each other,
And that's how things go.

She has her husband,
I have my father.
I have my sisters,
And she has her daughters.

Me and my mom,
Forever and ever.
Me and my mom,
It couldn't get better.
Me and my mom...<3

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this when I was I think in the 3rd grade lol
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 02 September 2015

Excellent expression at such a young age, innocent and pure poetically. Rhythm was very good back then also, you are a natural poet. Just keep writing, at least one poem every day! Thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to your Mom, very touching. RoseAnn

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Malik-seven Navarre 05 September 2015

Thank you RoseAnn for your feedback on my poems =) I never really thought about writing poetry I just did it when I felt like it or rather when I felt it. But now I will try to write one everyday to better myself ^_^

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